Saturday, August 28, 2010

Crumpled words of mind



Life is treacherous, like the moon’s spell

Cause we have to live and die another day…

Love is a metaphor, a red bird without mercy

It chases you to take the causeway to death

Don’t dream in a borrowed room wasting your breath

Life is longer than love, hold hands and stay…

Stay like the smiles in the photographs you took

Or the wonderful lines in that old book

Paint a pebble in your morning blues

No more conspiracy of spite, spineless filthy wishes

Stumble upon a doormat and dream of gumball rain….











Something I clicked and edited :)






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13 comments:

quartertoinsane said...

nice poem, n nice metaphor abt the red bird...

The Heretic Teen said...

hehe thanks :D

Fickle Cattle said...

Nice poem. But why can't love be longer than life?

http://ficklecattle.blogspot.com/

The Heretic Teen said...

because i didnt see it that way :P
I have shown love as a symbol only. and it doesnt last forever. negative thinking :P

thanks for reading :)

The Heretic Teen said...

because i didnt see it that way :P
I have shown love as a symbol only. and it doesnt last forever. negative thinking :P

thanks for reading :)

Under Urooba's Umbrella! said...

A. great poem.
B. great shot.

Conclusion: keep it up, and I'm for cereal yo! :)

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Destiny's child... said...

Nice poem, nice pic :)

I like the gumball rain part..:)and the rest of it too...
now what was the name of that movie? :/

Sidra Chaudhry said...

=) nice

The Heretic Teen said...

Thanks people :)

@Veena, "bedtime stories" :P
thankies.

Disguise said...

NICE!!

istupify said...

Shit... u got a Spam Comment! :D :P :P

Aneeewaayyzzzz ... Serious Nice Shit


Gumball Rains- Reminds Me of the Movie "Bedtime Stories"

P i x i e said...

^^Lol..i do...i get a lot of spam comments from useless asses :P
Thanks for stopping by and commenting :D
And yay, I just sounded tacky :P
I love that movie btw =]